Shweta, what a fantastic idea! But this could have been so much better! This would have worked so much better if you could have interviewed some of the audience afterwards and got their initial reactions to the film on video. 'Overall it was a good review' doesn't really cut it - how powerful would it have been for you to have got some live reactions, and asked them some questions. Where is the sound? Did you stage their reactions? Try and edit this so you haven't got so much blank time in between the sections. You also need to proof read your writing for errors.
Shweta, what a fantastic idea! But this could have been so much better!
ReplyDeleteThis would have worked so much better if you could have interviewed some of the audience afterwards and got their initial reactions to the film on video. 'Overall it was a good review' doesn't really cut it - how powerful would it have been for you to have got some live reactions, and asked them some questions. Where is the sound?
Did you stage their reactions? Try and edit this so you haven't got so much blank time in between the sections. You also need to proof read your writing for errors.
You seem to be missing any evidence of changes you have made to the poster or the film. This improvement process must be evidenced.
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