WWW: - Some enlargment of the main image - Use of a consistent colour scheme and stylistic font
EBI: - Why is your film title so small? This should be much larger and should have been at least placed slightly higher, it is very close to the credits at the bottom of the poster - Where is your strapline? This poster looks quite incomplete without one and clearly this is something that you have not implemented from the last feedback that was given to you - Why is there a mark on the doll's face? This looks very strange and this is something which is not present on the doll itself in the film. If you want the doll to look more sinister you have to consider how it is portrayed within the film so that these two products link! If the doll doesn't look sinister or aged within the film then it cannot look like that within your poster as this will be deceiving to your audience - The background of your poster is still very plain and does not show much sign of editing, this is something that you need to work on as the moment it does not show much progress from the last draft
WWW:
ReplyDelete- Some enlargment of the main image
- Use of a consistent colour scheme and stylistic font
EBI:
- Why is your film title so small? This should be much larger and should have been at least placed slightly higher, it is very close to the credits at the bottom of the poster
- Where is your strapline? This poster looks quite incomplete without one and clearly this is something that you have not implemented from the last feedback that was given to you
- Why is there a mark on the doll's face? This looks very strange and this is something which is not present on the doll itself in the film. If you want the doll to look more sinister you have to consider how it is portrayed within the film so that these two products link! If the doll doesn't look sinister or aged within the film then it cannot look like that within your poster as this will be deceiving to your audience
- The background of your poster is still very plain and does not show much sign of editing, this is something that you need to work on as the moment it does not show much progress from the last draft