WWW - You show some awareness of conventions Shweta and begin to organise your ideas appropriately. Some use of appropriate colours. EBI - The title really needs to be at the top of the poster - there seems to be too much space at the top of your poster so I feel that the title needs to be here. You don't seem to have a strap line even though you suggested that this is something that most horror posters have. You need to include one. In terms of your image, I like the idea of using the doll and I can see that you have manupilated the colour of her eyes to make it seem more demonic. If you are going to have it on the side of the poster, then you need to consider the big gap you currently have - most of the poster is black and there needs to be more. You either need to centralise the image so it does take up more of the page, include another image to the side or in the background, of the girl maybe. Alternatively, you could include another background so it is not all just black. Your credits at the bottom are not detailed enough. Go back to your research and identify key features of credits and include these on your own poster. You are missing all of the planning process Shweta. You were specifically told that you needed to include evidence of your journey - which decisions you have made and why. The final draft is not enough - why did you decide to use that image? Did you have other ideas? Why that font? Why that background? Do you have any evidence of you testing any of your suggestions on your target market? This all needs to be evident on the blog.
WWW - You show some awareness of conventions Shweta and begin to organise your ideas appropriately. Some use of appropriate colours.
ReplyDeleteEBI - The title really needs to be at the top of the poster - there seems to be too much space at the top of your poster so I feel that the title needs to be here.
You don't seem to have a strap line even though you suggested that this is something that most horror posters have. You need to include one.
In terms of your image, I like the idea of using the doll and I can see that you have manupilated the colour of her eyes to make it seem more demonic. If you are going to have it on the side of the poster, then you need to consider the big gap you currently have - most of the poster is black and there needs to be more. You either need to centralise the image so it does take up more of the page, include another image to the side or in the background, of the girl maybe. Alternatively, you could include another background so it is not all just black.
Your credits at the bottom are not detailed enough. Go back to your research and identify key features of credits and include these on your own poster.
You are missing all of the planning process Shweta. You were specifically told that you needed to include evidence of your journey - which decisions you have made and why. The final draft is not enough - why did you decide to use that image? Did you have other ideas? Why that font? Why that background? Do you have any evidence of you testing any of your suggestions on your target market? This all needs to be evident on the blog.