WWW - There is some awareness shown of genre and you do identify key features used to convey this. Some comment on the image and the background and how they help to convey some meaning. EBI - The image is not a slide in its own right so it is difficult to see what you are actually commenting on. You identify a lot of things Shweta and this needs to be explored in much more detail. You can't just say there is nothing to say about the font! You also state that the strap line is a rhetorical question but you need to explore exactly what it is asking and what this suggests about the film and the plot. The image needs more - don't just focus on the woman, consider what she is holding on to - what is it and what does it suggest about the film? You need to consider the use of the outside and the picturesque backdrop - it looks 'old' and 'ancient' which may forge links with the Shakespeare play Romeo and Juliet and this play was also set in Italy. Comment on the lack of actors names too. You need to consider what the film is about in more detail and which features have helped you to make these assumptions and predictions.
WWW - There is some awareness shown of genre and you do identify key features used to convey this. Some comment on the image and the background and how they help to convey some meaning.
ReplyDeleteEBI - The image is not a slide in its own right so it is difficult to see what you are actually commenting on. You identify a lot of things Shweta and this needs to be explored in much more detail. You can't just say there is nothing to say about the font! You also state that the strap line is a rhetorical question but you need to explore exactly what it is asking and what this suggests about the film and the plot.
The image needs more - don't just focus on the woman, consider what she is holding on to - what is it and what does it suggest about the film?
You need to consider the use of the outside and the picturesque backdrop - it looks 'old' and 'ancient' which may forge links with the Shakespeare play Romeo and Juliet and this play was also set in Italy. Comment on the lack of actors names too.
You need to consider what the film is about in more detail and which features have helped you to make these assumptions and predictions.