Feedback from the showcase

EBI:

• During the film some of the the scenes we're repeated. 
• We need to make the cutaways less obvious- make each scene link more 
• The starting scene dragged too long- the pan from the arm to the face was too slow motion and did not look like a scene from a horror movie but in looked like it's supposed to be an intimate scene.
• When the girl wakes up the lights in her room are on. This makes the film look unrealistic because during the night the lights are usually off. To tackle this situation we could use night vision cameras.
• The doll used is this film looks too child friendly. It has not scary side to it- to tackle this we maybe need to make it look more old and maybe chop off an arm and sew it back on.
• the music/sound used in this film was very 70's type which did not go with the film at all. 
• Another plot could be that the she can go into her parents room while she looks possessed 
• A rocking chair could be placed in the girls bedroom- and the doll could be sitting on the chair while it rocking rather than the heater. 
• The dialogues weren't clear enough so some scenes need to be re-shot to make it clearer for the audience to hear. 
• There was no music when the lights were flickering 
• At the stairs scene the music scene was too loud
• The girls face should come before the sound does
• Use more makeup on the girl 

WWW:

• The stairs scene is the best part of the scene because the camera angle used looked professional. 
• the lights flickering scene was good because when the lights turned off there was a slow pan to the girls face and then the lights turned on which looked quite scary.  
• Another good thing in this film was that the scenes made sense.