You claim that the fonts you have used are similar but you need to show evidence of this. You need screen shots of your work so it is evident where there are similarities. Why did you decide to use the same font across both texts? Why are you commenting on the fact that you don't feel your film title was effective? Not really appropriate for this question. It's not enough to just list all of the things that you wanted to keep consistent - you need to be more specific about what features are used across all three texts and how. Which colours have you used across the texts? Which fonts? Which images? And why have you decided to use these particular features across the texts? You comment on the fact that you used a key scene from the movie to use on your review - which key scene? You need to show it (a screenshot) and then you need to explain why you have chosen that particular image to use on your review and then show evidence of it on your review. The key thing you need to do here is look closely at which aspects of your film you have used in your poster and why, and which aspects of your film you have used within your review, and why. You then need to consider how you linked the poster to the review; which features you used to do this and again, explain why. In order to do this effectively, you will need screen shots of the aspects of your film and then screen shots of how you have then used these ideas and features in your poster and review. You can also comment on more subtle links you have made, as well as the obvious things like the colour red. It won't be sufficient to just have a written response to these questions; examiners do not want to see essay style responses here - they want to see you using different technologies to present your ideas. You need to proof read your work for errors. Where are the remaining two questions and your review? These were due last week. If you do not upload them, I cannot mark them and therefore whatever you post eventually, you will have to make do with the draft because there won't be enough time for you to make any improvements.
You claim that the fonts you have used are similar but you need to show evidence of this. You need screen shots of your work so it is evident where there are similarities. Why did you decide to use the same font across both texts?
ReplyDeleteWhy are you commenting on the fact that you don't feel your film title was effective? Not really appropriate for this question.
It's not enough to just list all of the things that you wanted to keep consistent - you need to be more specific about what features are used across all three texts and how. Which colours have you used across the texts? Which fonts? Which images? And why have you decided to use these particular features across the texts?
You comment on the fact that you used a key scene from the movie to use on your review - which key scene? You need to show it (a screenshot) and then you need to explain why you have chosen that particular image to use on your review and then show evidence of it on your review.
The key thing you need to do here is look closely at which aspects of your film you have used in your poster and why, and which aspects of your film you have used within your review, and why. You then need to consider how you linked the poster to the review; which features you used to do this and again, explain why.
In order to do this effectively, you will need screen shots of the aspects of your film and then screen shots of how you have then used these ideas and features in your poster and review. You can also comment on more subtle links you have made, as well as the obvious things like the colour red.
It won't be sufficient to just have a written response to these questions; examiners do not want to see essay style responses here - they want to see you using different technologies to present your ideas.
You need to proof read your work for errors.
Where are the remaining two questions and your review? These were due last week. If you do not upload them, I cannot mark them and therefore whatever you post eventually, you will have to make do with the draft because there won't be enough time for you to make any improvements.